Looking forward to it! And well done in meeting your personal deadline.
One pre-test comment to start the ball rolling; in the pic above, the woman leaning on the table looks strangely positioned, as the shadow makes it look like she's stood in front of the table and couldn't be leaning on it from that angle. It might also be a perspective thing (moving her up a bit might help). Anyway, the rest of the scene works well; nice character designs and scenery.