Gimme some feedback on my songs!

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Post » Sat May 07, 2011 5:23 pm

Hi there! I've been writing music both for games and just for fun, for a few years now on and off, but recently got some more time to work with it. So here's some links. Feedback is very much appreciated.

Here are the most obviously game-ish chiptune songs. These are the first songs i've made in this genre.

http://soundcloud.com/jonatan-krogh/asp ... orite-move

http://soundcloud.com/jonatan-krogh/when-one-is-right

And here on my soundcloud page you can find the rest of my uploaded songs.

http://soundcloud.com/jonatan-krogh


Hope you like it!
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Post » Sat May 07, 2011 5:49 pm

Nice music Attan, the first one is really catchy.
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Post » Sat May 07, 2011 6:05 pm

The first(favorite-move) has some potential, but the instrument used for the melody, the reverby, high pitched one, is a bit annoying.

Liked the second(is-right).

Loved 10m radius, the pops could use somethin, they're a bit harsh after a while.

Pretty good over all, keep chiping!
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Post » Sat May 07, 2011 7:47 pm

I must agree with newt on the first song.Second one could do with more base though.Good work keep it up. :wink:
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Post » Sat Jun 11, 2011 7:11 am

Here's a new one, a whole new style. It feels like it would do well in some game, but i don't really know in what situation I'd use it.. exploration of some sort maybe, but the graphics really has to be special to match the mood of the song.

Do me a favor and listen with headphones and cranked up volume in a relaxed situation. And give it more than two minutes, the intro is a bit slow.

http://soundcloud.com/jonatan-krogh/night-views
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Post » Sat Jun 11, 2011 8:19 am

Awesome songs Attan! I wish I could make songs like this, mine suck :P
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