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Post » Fri Feb 28, 2014 3:07 pm

Hi, I'm making a new game "Vegies Saga" but I'm not sure about the graphics, can you please what you think about it?
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Post » Sat Mar 01, 2014 11:11 am

I personally would add some more shape (not so rounded) and/or some subtle highlights/shadows.
However, if you want to keep it like it is, you should check the silhouettes, especially the potato, that could also be a brown egg.

That´s how I´d do it.
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Cheers
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Post » Sat Mar 01, 2014 5:05 pm

WackyToaster wrote:I personally would add some more shape (not so rounded) and/or some subtle highlights/shadows.
However, if you want to keep it like it is, you should check the silhouettes, especially the potato, that could also be a brown egg.

That´s how I´d do it.
potato.jpg


Cheers


Wow you're an amazing graphic designer, If i could do that I wouldn't then ask people to see my work. Great work and thanks fro the reply!
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Post » Mon Jul 20, 2015 4:47 pm

:) Well it depends on what people you are "targeting" with this game of yours?, young kids would like your simply art style. Since it is easy recognisable.

If i had to point something out, that i would change in your drawings - is to make a outline on the eyes, mouth etc. :) while not very "realistic" it just looks more pleasing to the eye.
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