make a great c2 enemy tracking radar with ease

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Post » Sat Jun 22, 2013 2:02 pm

heres how to make an amazing c2 radar where you can see the enemies on the radar
this is something to boooooooost your game make sure you leave feed back and if you like it favorite it
https://www.scirra.com/tutorials/559/making-a-radar

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Post » Sun Jun 23, 2013 5:18 am

def great! Thanks for sharing
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Post » Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:51 am

Not really a user friendly tutorial but it's informative none-the-less.
Thanks for sharing.
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Post » Sun Jun 23, 2013 2:01 pm

Great thanks...
As long as I can move left, right and fire, I'm Happy...
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Post » Sun Jun 23, 2013 5:02 pm

@tekniko
what would you suggest i do talk more about it show more pics or what

@everybody
thankssssss for the feed backsosensible2013-06-23 17:03:15
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Post » Wed Jun 26, 2013 2:50 pm

@Teknik
ok check it out again please i think its allot better but would prefer to have someone else say that
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Post » Wed Jun 26, 2013 5:02 pm


hi yes its informative; seems like a lot of people find it useful too..
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Post » Wed Jun 26, 2013 5:37 pm

but is it user friendly?
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Post » Wed Jun 26, 2013 7:37 pm

Well for starters.

Your using paragraph spacing and bolding for your first introduction. There is a lack of capitilization at the beginning of each sentance. You using the word, "tut" not tutorial.

Some tutorial types work better with an image at the beggining that represents a final work. A Radar tutorial would suit this. Am I making a mini radar int he corner, or am I making a full screen radar. Adding this tot he description with a pic would be super usefull.

When you section off, the description paragraph should be below the headline, not before it.

layers <=== the size here is fine.
Start with need two layers with the proper paralex. <== should be below, not above.

Also add a description how the components work. While I can easily infer that radar paralax and it's meaning. You should always assume the reader knows less than you. It's easy to write with the idea taht all readers know as much as you, but then you wouldn't need the tutorial would you :D

If you need to use a showing for Event/Actions use an image. Text representations are terrible.

if a section is particulary complex. Show your image, then a step by step by step walk thru

Capitalize your sections too. It looks strange to see the guide jump from Overview, then everything else to lowercase.

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Post » Wed Jun 26, 2013 11:18 pm

thanks loads can you check it out again
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