Mr. Coffee's: Decontruction

Hi friends of scirra, we made our first game in construct 2. It called

"Mr. Coffee's: Decontruction"

<img src="http://25.media.tumblr.com/f56a6e937544142f56a35d2ff1693196/tumblr_mi6vsoD8GM1s04xpzo1_r1_1280.png" border="0" />

Here is the trailer!

[TUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWO7WOy4sPU[/TUBE]

We are searching for publisher and sponsorship in Fgl.

Greetings!!! ^^

Hello Ulpo, the link throws this:

Not Found

Error 404

The colors were picked badly, everything looks like vomit.

fassFlash why you are always so rude? If not have some constructive to say, better not say nothing <img src="smileys/smiley7.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

— media the link not work.

I have nothing else to say, the game doesn't work.

We down the link, because we change all art of game and we are in the last moment of development.

Soon i will upload a trailer.

keep in touch :D

fassFlash - that was unnessecarily rude, how about trying some constructive criticism instead? Like "your work would really be improved by learning about color theory. You can search google for color theory tutorials, it'll make your work look much better."

Hi guys! Here is the trailer of Mr. Coffee's: Deconstruction

[TUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rWO7WOy4sPU[/TUBE]

We are testing the game looking for bugs, maybe the next week we upload it in kongregate :D

Greetings

P.D: fassFlash There are nicer ways of saying things, that version was very ugly, i know, but look the change now... Greetings ^^

— media

hi like the idea of the game.. looks good too

— media

This is looking fun! I'd be screaming all the way through from falling in holes :D

Colors look fine now. 8-bit-ish so you'll hear no complaints from me :)

Whenever I get stuck for a color palette I seek out the past for inspiration! I'm having a wonderful time learning to use the NES color palette to it's full extent right now. Everything is a learning experience no matter how much you already know!

Keep up the excellent work!

The game is in kongregate now!!!

http://www.kongregate.com/games/UlpoMedia/mr-coffees-deconstruction

Play and vote please! <img src="smileys/smiley26.gif" border="0" align="middle">

Ok, so if I said "the colors are not pleasing to the eye", would that be more constructive? I think not. It is the same information said differently.

The colors were picked badly, everything looks like vomit.

I laughed ... Anyways , the level design is too vague ... the player would never guess that key would be down in the block

Ok, so if I said "the colors are not pleasing to the eye", would that be more constructive? I think not. It is the same information said differently.

If you said that it would be more polite. Constructive criticism is about making someone aware of ways they could improve their work in a positive manner, rather than tearing them down, like as I mentioned in my example of recommending googling color theory. Telling someone flat out that their work looks like vomit is an unnessecary insult which there is nothing to be gained from, and doesn't encourage or help the person to improve.