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Post » Tue Dec 30, 2008 2:47 am

Hi there!! This is my first post. Well this will be my first game in Construct, i'm working on it and discovering Construct as well. Please make a download and give me some feedback. The game already have sound but i hasn't exported it due the size of file. Sorry my poor english, i'm from Brazil!! Thanks!

<a href="http://rapidshare.com/files/178023365/OsBicho.rar">CLICK HERE TO DOWNLOAD</a>

Controls:
a,d: Walk
s: down
j: "shoot"
k: jump
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Post » Tue Dec 30, 2008 8:35 am

fix the link to the file, 'cause someone might be confused ;>
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Post » Wed Dec 31, 2008 2:45 am

Sorry! Now i think that is right!

Link: [url:12wmxcqc]http://www.filefactory.com/file/aff3bd1/n/OsBicho_rar[/url:12wmxcqc]

thanks!!
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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 11:37 am

Hey, here's some screenshots:



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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 1:49 pm

it is funny looking, but y you can't use your hoe as a weapon? For me it is obvies he should be able to use. And he should shoot from the sling.
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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:04 pm

Very nice artwork in this one :D. I can see a lot of potential for this game. Unfortunately you have some collision problems that need to be dealt with. The character sometimes gets caught up on the ground and you have to jump to get over, like, a blade of grass :P. Also, the character can get stuck in the moving platform and teleport to the top.

There are also a couple places where platforms could be placed better to allow for easier jumping. Right after the second pit in the barn if you don't jump just right then you fall into the pit. And the rails above the moving platform are solid, so when you try to jump off you can easily hit your head and fall instead of making the jump across. I'd make the rails non-solid so you can make that jump easier.

Another quick note: starting from the very beginning every time you die is tedious. If you die in the barn, you should start in the barn.

And for some reason after the first playthrough some of the platforms and such in the barn disappeared. I don't know what would be causing that. You might want to post a bug report about it.

Overall really nice work so far though, keep at it :)
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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 9:07 pm

Beautiful artwork and animations, I love the style :D It was quite hard though... nowhere to hide from enemies!
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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:07 pm

[quote="megatronx":18f8z81g]it is funny looking, but y you can't use your hoe as a weapon? For me it is obvies he should be able to use. And he should shoot from the sling.[/quote:18f8z81g]

Oh!! He doesn't use it because the hoe is only to gain extra life or "Chances" as i put in the game. When you get 100 you got an extra life. The history of the game will show the reason of that balls!!
Really thanks for your reply!!
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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:11 pm

[quote="deadeye":3r13q1jr]Very nice artwork in this one :D. I can see a lot of potential for this game. Unfortunately you have some collision problems that need to be dealt with. The character sometimes gets caught up on the ground and you have to jump to get over, like, a blade of grass :P. Also, the character can get stuck in the moving platform and teleport to the top.

There are also a couple places where platforms could be placed better to allow for easier jumping. Right after the second pit in the barn if you don't jump just right then you fall into the pit. And the rails above the moving platform are solid, so when you try to jump off you can easily hit your head and fall instead of making the jump across. I'd make the rails non-solid so you can make that jump easier.

Another quick note: starting from the very beginning every time you die is tedious. If you die in the barn, you should start in the barn.

And for some reason after the first playthrough some of the platforms and such in the barn disappeared. I don't know what would be causing that. You might want to post a bug report about it.

Overall really nice work so far though, keep at it :)[/quote:3r13q1jr]


Really thanks for your notes!! I'll fix the problems and soon e will put another release of the game for download. Thanks!!
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Post » Thu Jan 01, 2009 10:22 pm

[quote="Ashley":30qowbz2]Beautiful artwork and animations, I love the style :D It was quite hard though... nowhere to hide from enemies![/quote:30qowbz2]

Thanks for reply! Soon i will put a web site on the net. Do you have the Construct logo in .svg format? I'd like to put the logo on the site and link to scirra.com.
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