Pinkman (inspired by N)

Show us your works in progress and request feedback

Post » Wed Jul 20, 2016 11:20 pm

Hi! I've been developing this game for some time, and i would appreciate any kind of feedback on it. Thank you! :)
Ps: Sorry if i said something wrong, it's not my main language.

https://bonzerkitten7.itch.io/pinkman
Image
B
40
S
14
G
2
Posts: 132
Reputation: 3,527

Post » Thu Jul 21, 2016 1:55 am

some colors are much bright. just it to say.

(portuguese translation: algumas cores são muito brilhosas. só isso.)

I do not know if we can speak in other language than english here in the forum.
B
74
S
34
G
69
Posts: 235
Reputation: 40,471

Post » Thu Jul 21, 2016 2:05 am

The colors belong to the PICO-8 color palette, but i'll probably make my own palette soon, because as you said, they're very bright/annoying sometimes. Don't worry about speaking portuguese, i can reasonably speak and read english, but thank you anyway. :)
Image
B
40
S
14
G
2
Posts: 132
Reputation: 3,527

Post » Thu Jul 21, 2016 7:42 am

love this! (i didnt manage to finish it)
this is cool in its cripsness and minimalism. although i think it could use more visual clues to its setting; where am i, what am i doing there?
are you featuer complete and only making more levels now, or is this done altogether
really fun though.
B
15
S
7
Posts: 244
Reputation: 2,065

Post » Thu Jul 21, 2016 11:13 pm

Thank you, facecrime! Love to hear that :)
I'll add more color palettes to have more variety and be less tiring to look at. There will be a little story about the character and why his pink, it will make the have a lot more sense i guess. And thank you one more time, i'll absolutely take care about everything you said, all that feedback is really important! :D
Image
B
40
S
14
G
2
Posts: 132
Reputation: 3,527

Post » Fri Jul 22, 2016 2:32 am

Sooo pink!

I think the 'fart bar' should disappear a half second after it's recharged, otherwise you're running around with a bar above your head and it doesn't look as nice.

What template did you start with to do this project?

Edit: 4 is just too brutal with the button in between spikes right after a difficult jump, etc!
B
52
S
15
G
4
Posts: 191
Reputation: 5,612

Post » Fri Jul 22, 2016 3:50 am

Yeah, i love pink! Haha :)
That's a great idea, i'll absolutely take care about it, thank you for the suggestion!
I used the "Retro Style Project", so all the pixels have hard edges.
Come on, you can do it! Send me a snapshot if you reach level 10 hahaha :D
Image
B
40
S
14
G
2
Posts: 132
Reputation: 3,527


Return to Works in Progress/Feedback Requests

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 3 guests