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Post » Mon Jun 08, 2015 4:59 am

Usman Haq wrote:You cannot expect to get so many customers on the mobile market. It's such a saturated market! Of course there are things that you can do such as, contacting review sites, making a website of your own, and basically telling everyone you know. Mostly though, it's out of the developers control. Does your game deserve attention? Yes, but so does every other game that comes out on the Mobile market as well. People want what they want.

I wish your game the best of luck in the future.


thanks so much for replying and for the advice you are right and i will go with what you said, thanks for wishing me luck too
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Post » Mon Jun 08, 2015 5:05 am

Hasan999 wrote:Hi Ali,

Just played your game... It's fun and well-programmed, but need improvements for sure. Rated it 5 Stars on Play Store to help it get more attention. However, here's my detailed and frank review:

First Mode:

As of now: Amazing game play, perfect controls, challenging and fun to play.
By the way, there is one bug: Highscores do not get submitted! please check.

Improvements: Ball could be slightly bigger, after every 10 points, create another ball just for extra fun and continuity - Imagine someone trying to preserve 5 balls in the circle, that would be awesome, compared to one ball for 5x times more time - that may get boring, right?

Second Mode:

As of now: Took me a long time to understand the controls ! - I got a hang of it, but it ain't easy. Always make sure to have the easiest control so that the users get challenged by the game alone, not how to play the game.
Improvements: I suggest having "Point towards Touch.X, Touch.Y" controls. Let it follow the finger and it will be amazing! Trust me.

Third Mode: (Levels)

As of now: That's like a hidden mode! I would not have found it, if I wasn't to assess your game! It's good, but that's really a different type of game.
Suggestion: I suggest making a whole new game with that concept. OR. keep the three modes in a line to choose from. You can have a look at my game that I recently posted (Stickman Cricket League) to get an idea on how to make things "look" much more appealing and simple to use, because that helps a lot.

Apart from that, I also suggest having a "Share on Facebook" button, which will help you gain more downloads (because you shouldn't expect an Android user to randomly bump into your game, it took me a lot of scrolling to reach it after searching exactly your game title!). But, you will need to work on the game-improvements first so that you have returning customers, not the one-time audience or those 1-star lovers.

Hope this would help.. Feel free to ask me for any help :)
I'd also appreciate if you can have a look and review my game as well !

Oh, and about the Video Trailer... 10/10 for that, just epic!

Cheers!
Hasan


Hasan ! what can I say to thank you!! thats the most helpful review i had since I published the game ! you are awesome man thank you so much for all the suggestions I will take them all into account.

I will improve upon all the suggestions you provided. Thank you again so much.

and about the levels mode! haha yea it was kind of the real game first only levels but then the others came to mind : ) and levels mode became secondary as it takes like 20 minutes to make a level and i ran out of ideas for the levels.

I would like to review your game too ! can you please give me your email so i can email you the review and maybe discuss some issues maybe we can work on something that be a break through

Kind regards
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Post » Mon Jun 08, 2015 8:24 am

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 Version 3 can access:
In-app purchases

Identity

    find accounts on the device

Location

    approximate location (network-based)

Photos/Media/Files

    modify or delete the contents of your USB storage
    read the contents of your USB storage

Wi-Fi connection information

    view Wi-Fi connections

Device ID & call information

    read phone status and identity

Other

    full network access
    view network connections
    prevent device from sleeping




the app doesn't even work, on my mobile, cause its unsecured! automatically gets delete! you might want to check the com.yourcompany.com id!
and i wold suggest to change the app access requests! u dont need access to peoples SD card and the ability to control it, also you dont need to withdraw any account information pictures and address book contacts! since your game is a small avoiding game, with a in app purchase that disable ads, and kinda that's it! wish u gluck in future!
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Post » Mon Jun 08, 2015 5:26 pm

@gamecorpstudio

Hey thanks for informing me about this error and I will fix it as soon as possible : ) thanks again that was very helpful.
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Post » Mon Jun 08, 2015 5:35 pm

gamecorpstudio wrote:
Code: Select all
 Version 3 can access:
In-app purchases

Identity

    find accounts on the device

Location

    approximate location (network-based)

Photos/Media/Files

    modify or delete the contents of your USB storage
    read the contents of your USB storage

Wi-Fi connection information

    view Wi-Fi connections

Device ID & call information

    read phone status and identity

Other

    full network access
    view network connections
    prevent device from sleeping




the app doesn't even work, on my mobile, cause its unsecured! automatically gets delete! you might want to check the com.yourcompany.com id!
and i wold suggest to change the app access requests! u dont need access to peoples SD card and the ability to control it, also you dont need to withdraw any account information pictures and address book contacts! since your game is a small avoiding game, with a in app purchase that disable ads, and kinda that's it! wish u gluck in future!


Hey thanks for informing me about this error and I will fix it as soon as possible : ) thanks again that was very helpful.

however i have a tiny problem ! which I dont know how to reduce the permissions. I use Ludei cloud to compile
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Post » Sun Jun 14, 2015 6:35 am

New update include new features and sqaures ! and also a brand new icon
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Post » Mon Jun 22, 2015 7:14 am

new update :-
- Brand new simple interface
- New icon
- Highscore submission fixed
- fix performance lag
- Remove ads button
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Post » Fri Jul 31, 2015 5:52 pm

How did you compile your project to run?
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Post » Fri Jul 31, 2015 7:34 pm

it is funny how all android developers use iphone for trailer presentations :)
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Post » Mon Aug 03, 2015 8:23 pm

Themaker482 wrote:How did you compile your project to run?




i have used coocnjs to compile
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