Sugar Free - My first game need feedback

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Post » Sat Jul 04, 2015 3:22 am

My wife say that you can always burn your calories very easy. I made this game to show her how easy is.

- Click or Tap the candy to burn calories
- Every fallen candy give you more calories
- Reach 0 calories to win

Are you brave enough to reach 0 calories?

Feedback is much appreciated, and thanks for playing!

https://www.scirra.com/arcade/action-ga ... r-free-958
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Post » Sat Jul 04, 2015 2:45 pm

Neat! For a first game not bad. I would put the the description of the objective of the game into some kind of intro.
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Post » Sat Jul 04, 2015 10:11 pm

Very good game. Congratulations
You know nothing, Jon Snow
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Post » Sun Jul 05, 2015 1:06 am

:) Smooth cotton-candy like graphics, i like that part.

But i think:
It needs some very chilling music.
Its IMPOSSIBLE to beat, way to much candy gets spawned when you reach 1500.
Is there more then one level?
Why do the candy spin around?

Suggestions:
Only make a certain amount of candy drop - and give the player point on how much candy they click
Rating for when you complete a map. 1=bad preformance 2=Medium 3=good
When you click the "BAD" candy, replace it with "GOOD" vegetables.
When the "BAD" candy reaches the bottom - play a YUCK sound
WHen the "GOOD" vegetables reaches the bottom - play a YAY sound
.. music :D
A sound when you hit stuff.
A animation when you hit stuff.
Other levels - or a map (that displays how well you did on each map)

... bum bum yeah i think that just about covers it.
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Post » Sun Jul 05, 2015 1:35 am

Thanks for the feedback
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