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Post » Sun Mar 20, 2016 6:17 pm

I've been working on this game for 6 months now and it's almost finished!
You can check the video here:
www(DOT)youtube(DOT)com/watch?v=T5t1Ds7Crek

(Sry but Im still not able to post direct links ^^;)
Any feedback would be appreciated!~ <3
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Post » Sun Mar 20, 2016 8:55 pm

Some feedback:

-Graphics are beautiful but walk cycle looks a little bit awkward. Might need to add 3 or 4 more frames in between.
-Game looks like a puzzle platformer?
-Music is excellent. It has that Chrono Trigger upbeat vibe
-With a face like the character has, I didn't think "Evan Davis" was a fitting name. He looks more like a "Makoto" or a "Shinji" or something
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Post » Sun Mar 20, 2016 9:45 pm

wow.. cool.. a lot of work for only 6 months!

here's the link..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5t1Ds7Crek

Are you using spritefonts? if not you should.. some of the fonts you are using aren't great looking.. they look like Arial or something.. I'd make select a nice "fat" colorful font with a subtle outline color.. use BlackHornet's "Give Your Fonts Mono(spacing)"

I agree the walk cycle could be smoother..

good job so far.. lots of work!
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Post » Sun Mar 20, 2016 10:54 pm

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MPPlantOfficial wrote:Some feedback:

-Graphics are beautiful but walk cycle looks a little bit awkward. Might need to add 3 or 4 more frames in between.
-Game looks like a puzzle platformer?
-Music is excellent. It has that Chrono Trigger upbeat vibe
-With a face like the character has, I didn't think "Evan Davis" was a fitting name. He looks more like a "Makoto" or a "Shinji" or something


Yes I will Make more frames into the walk cycle cause I'm so used to watching it that I don't see it weird haha but now that you mention it you're right.
It's puzzle platform rpg aventure kind of game xD I dunno what to call it hahah! ^^;
I compose the music myself and now that you pointed out Chrono Trigger music it does sound a bit like that :o
I could change the name but I didn't want to give him a Japanese name. I might have to think about it.
Thanks for you feedback tho, I appreciate it!

jobel wrote:wow.. cool.. a lot of work for only 6 months!

here's the link..
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T5t1Ds7Crek

Are you using spritefonts? if not you should.. some of the fonts you are using aren't great looking.. they look like Arial or something.. I'd make select a nice "fat" colorful font with a subtle outline color.. use BlackHornet's "Give Your Fonts Mono(spacing)"

I agree the walk cycle could be smoother..

good job so far.. lots of work!


I'm not using spritefont. The idea didn't even cross my mind but it sounds great. I will have to check that out and see! :o
Also thank you for your feedback!~ <3
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