Too cheesy?

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Post » Mon Sep 21, 2015 1:20 pm

Hello World,

Here's the description I came up with for my upcoming game Kill The Blocks. I'd love to know what you guys think, is it too cheesy? Does it make you wanna play the game more or less? Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

VIKINGS wrote:Kill The Blocks !!!

Kill The Blocks is a simple yet challenging action game that puts your reflexes and hand-eye coordonation to the test.
Spawning ten leves across four difficulty modes full of block killing action see how many stars you can grab and show the Kill The Blocks leaderboards who is boss!

With beautiful graphics, particle effects and nine awesome tracks Kill The Blocks will take care of all your block smashing needs.

So what are you waiting for?! Give Kill The Blocks a try today!


Thank you.

P.S. The reason why I use "Kill The Blocks" so many times in the description is because I read somewhere that you have to use each word at least 5 times in order for it to appear in search engines.
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Post » Mon Sep 21, 2015 4:48 pm

Doesn't sound cheesy to me. Do you have a mockup of how it works and how you actually 'kill' the blocks?
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Post » Mon Sep 21, 2015 5:50 pm

Yeah, the game is pretty much finished @PhoenixNightly , 2 or 3 days away from release. The reason why I am not gonna show it here is because I don't want your responses to be influenced by the game guys. I want the description to be judged on it's own merit and that alone.
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Post » Mon Sep 21, 2015 6:42 pm

To be honest, I don't recall harboring any ill will for blocks.
At least not up till now.
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Post » Mon Sep 21, 2015 6:47 pm

Ah OK. No problem at all.
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