What does this look like?

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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 3:10 am

This is a platform game that I'm working on now. The characters, the place, the setting. Interested to know what it all looks like, what it would remind you of.

Oops, the grey and green blank bars are not supposed to be visible, they are not visible in the actual game that I'm working on. Also, the yellowish bars are invisible boarder lines for the enemies to reverse direction. And as for the orange background, in the game it's replaced with a cavern background.
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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 8:18 pm

Are you looking for an opinion based on this screenshot?
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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 9:22 pm

Yes, if this is the right place for it.
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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 10:00 pm

Looks like your off to a good start. Hard to form much more of an opinion without some details about the game.
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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 10:53 pm

Are these green n yellow light lines part of the game?
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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 11:21 pm

They are but are not really supposed to be visible. They are just solid ground and platform. Can see the other characters better in the last one.
Here's a better example of what it looks like.
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Post » Sun Oct 19, 2014 11:57 pm

It look like it takes place in the future but the grates make it seem like it's in a futuristic sewer system.
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Post » Thu Oct 23, 2014 1:05 am

The characters have different resolutions and the colored ones seem to be rescaled which makes them blurry. Not a very professional thing to have in your game.
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Post » Mon Oct 27, 2014 6:36 am

Is this better?

I'd like to make the characters and background looking good and interesting so it'll be playable.
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